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poem for national poetry month

Journal Entry: Fri Apr 4, 2008, 7:08 PM
  • Mood: Rejected
  • Listening to: people
  • Reading: nothing
  • Watching: the squiggly line in my eye
  • Playing: your xbox
  • Eating: your food
  • Drinking: your water
I am

Who am i you ask?
i am mightier the the sword.
I am the one who starts and ends them in one swift stroke.
I am the one who grants and takes freedoms from nations.
I am the who brings leaders into power and nations into chaos.
I am the who strides across the paper with a beauty many cannot match.
I am used to speak out to speak out the feelings of a writer, ideas some may never comprehend.
Who am i?
I am the pen!
I am the mightiest of all humanities creations.
The sword has power.
But i play the sword like a puppet.
I am the pen all should fear the power on can wield with me.
Civilization personifies me, humanity idolizes me.
Who am i?
I am the pen there is no object that is no object that has more of an impact then me!

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~Solus1185:iconSolus1185: Apr 4, 2008, 8:08:02 PM
Seriously though, before all violent acts were ever undertaken, someone signed their name with a pen...


...but since I'm a joker I gotta ask, where does this put the pencil?

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To hell with dreams and smile

"He who loves me will love my dog also"
( St Bernard of Clairvaux )

And the Red Queen's "off with her head!"
Remember what the dormouse said
~zaku0909:iconzaku0909: Apr 5, 2008, 4:28:39 PM
it puts the pencil is......looked down apon for it can fade away like get erased and stuff and pen is hard to remove so yea if that made sense

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"Gentlemen we can rebuild him"


"oh no my guns jammed!" *gets shot in the head. "this is what i get for playing as carmine"
*CreativeImages:iconCreativeImages: Apr 6, 2008, 7:44:49 AM
Very nicely written! A few words need to be added but very nicely written! And yes, what is mighter than the pen (or pencil)? :hug:

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NUTTY FUDGEKINNS!

Sometimes I annoy you because you pissed me off...but it's usually because I like to push your buttons :dance:

They call me Pickles and Giggles...I call myself Pickle Giggle ^^
~zaku0909:iconzaku0909: Apr 6, 2008, 1:46:34 PM
thank you >.> i didnt read over it XD, pen all the way

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"Gentlemen we can rebuild him"


"oh no my guns jammed!" *gets shot in the head. "this is what i get for playing as carmine"
*CreativeImages:iconCreativeImages: Apr 7, 2008, 12:04:13 PM
XD When you edit it though, it will be a work of art ^^

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NUTTY FUDGEKINNS!

Sometimes I annoy you because you pissed me off...but it's usually because I like to push your buttons :dance:

They call me Pickles and Giggles...I call myself Pickle Giggle ^^
~zaku0909:iconzaku0909: Apr 7, 2008, 12:24:13 PM
when i get around to it :[

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"Gentlemen we can rebuild him"


"oh no my guns jammed!" *gets shot in the head. "this is what i get for playing as carmine"
*CreativeImages:iconCreativeImages: Apr 7, 2008, 12:28:45 PM
Time is always the obstacle >.<

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NUTTY FUDGEKINNS!

Sometimes I annoy you because you pissed me off...but it's usually because I like to push your buttons :dance:

They call me Pickles and Giggles...I call myself Pickle Giggle ^^
~zaku0909:iconzaku0909: Apr 7, 2008, 12:41:20 PM
i know right?

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"Gentlemen we can rebuild him"


"oh no my guns jammed!" *gets shot in the head. "this is what i get for playing as carmine"